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I remember seeing your X-men about the same time as I built mine, jampot.  Those torsos really are great. 
Thanks Rockydude!
Wilco, I originally had the Clone Trooper face for him and it looked okay but it looks better on Juggernaut.  Both the Mandalorian head and the clone trooper have the same sort of feel that I wanted with their faces but they're not perfect.  I actually had that head on a Green Goblin (Norman Osborn) for and while and it looked the best. 
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I have some figures for Leprechauns in France, I want to know if these all look okay and fit with the set.

Fred the leprechaun:

https://scontent-b-iad.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn2/t1/q71/s720x720/10060_680510825305596_1778419578_n.jpg

Henry the Irishman:

https://scontent-a-iad.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/q71/s720x720/1620652_680510888638923_1882631804_n.jpg

Garry the Frenchman:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn2/t1/q71/s720x720/1555429_680510905305588_323908904_n.jpg

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Hmm, Garry looks sticks out quite a bit in comparison to the others.  He has a fairly modern t-shirt type thing, whereas Henry and Fred have more old-fashioned formal-looking clothing.

If I were to see Garry in the park, I would think the film was set in the present day (or recent past/near future), whereas Fred/Henry would make me think a fantasy world or historical era (Victorian, 1920s, etc.) instead.

Perhaps you could give Garry a shirt or suit, something that would look pretty normal in today's world, but could also pass for something in a historical era/fantasy world.  Something less distinctly modern-looking and more timeless, if that makes sense.  But if this current look is what you're going for, by all means do it.

Also, I find it a bit odd that all three characters have the same head.  (Though I too have a habit of making loads of characters with the Classic Smiley---not to long ago I came up with a whole army of characters, pretty much all of whom had that head...)

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I was considering giving Garry and outfit like the others.
Do you have any specific suggestions?
(I'd like it to have green, though, I like having it involve green somehow due to the nature of this film)

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I was originally thinking a white shirt, something along the lines of this.  It could fit equally well in a fantasy or modern world.  Or possibly something like this.

However, since you've mentioned green, possibilities could be this, this or maybe this.  I don't know the exact specifics of your collection, but I'm guessing you'd have at least one of those.  Or, you could just use a plain green torso.

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Planning a short film about a nuclear apocalypse. Here is the main character I'm working on:

http://i.imgur.com/fZn1nQL.jpg

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Well, it certainly gives off a war/danger mood. I would maybe take away that background, as it sort of takes away from the environment. Adding some other objects in the scene would help too, like debris, rocks, vegetation, etc. Of course, you may have your own way of doing this, so I could be wrong with my judgement. All in all, I'm looking forward to this! mini/smile

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GHB wrote:

Well, it certainly gives off a war/danger mood. I would maybe take away that background, as it sort of takes away from the environment. Adding some other objects in the scene would help too, like debris, rocks, vegetation, etc. Of course, you may have your own way of doing this, so I could be wrong with my judgement. All in all, I'm looking forward to this! mini/smile


Lol its not the set just a board I had sitting around and then part of a board behind my animation table. mini/tongue

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Two main characters for a fantasy film I'm working at.

Are they good? I quite like the old one (Greygon), and I like the direction of the pharaoh-eque one (Diabolum Boni) is going in, but I might want to change it a bit.

Sorry for the quality on Diabolum... I must have been shaking.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/P3/prepics/img_4344.jpg

Updated version.... I like it more
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/P3/prepics/img_4379.jpg


http://www.majhost.com/gallery/P3/prepics/img_4345.jpg

Thanks!

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@Shutterpoint,
Looks great!
I love the color-scheme and NPU with the Boba Helmet.
I might suggest seeing if you can get printing on the legs to break up the green a bit, but otherwise it's really nice.


@Pie,
They're ok, but the color scheme seems a bit too random and un-matching. There're just too many colors in too small of a space. I highly recommend stripping them down and simplifying them.

The top one, I just don't like that orange with the pearl-gold, and the dark blue markings on the helmet aren't repeated anywhere else. This makes them stick out and adds yet another color. Also, torso screams ninja, weapons scream Egypt, it just doesn't look right to me.

The middle one just needs black or dark-blue arms and he'd be fine.

Bottom one, change the shoulder pads to black, and the legs/hands to black and he'll be great. Or maybe try changing the legs/hands to white. The yellow doesn't go that great with the pearly gold chest, but it can work.

Sorry to be so negative. mini/sad

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Shutterpoint wrote:

Planning a short film about a nuclear apocalypse. Here is the main character I'm working on:

I like the figure overall, however, to maybe give it a more apocalyptic feeling, I would replace the arms and the hip piece with a dark tan colour. Just a suggestion, as I'm merely referencing the colour used from game titles such as Fallout

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Pritchard Studios wrote:

@Pie,
They're ok, but the color scheme seems a bit too random and un-matching. There're just too many colors in too small of a space. I highly recommend stripping them down and simplifying them.

The top one, I just don't like that orange with the pearl-gold, and the dark blue markings on the helmet aren't repeated anywhere else. This makes them stick out and adds yet another color. Also, torso screams ninja, weapons scream Egypt, it just doesn't look right to me.

The middle one just needs black or dark-blue arms and he'd be fine.

Bottom one, change the shoulder pads to black, and the legs/hands to black and he'll be great. Or maybe try changing the legs/hands to white. The yellow doesn't go that great with the pearly gold chest, but it can work.

Sorry to be so negative. mini/sad

No! Don't be sorry! That helps a ton! Thanks.

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Here are a whole bunch of new figs.

From left: the Jarl of Vampire Town, so detached from his humanity that he's barely physical anymore, and so old he remembers the pyramids being built; a Banshee, whose deadly wails are the herald of death; a knight of Tuskwood; and a Draugr, a lost viking spirit. I'd love to do animations with all of these, and hopefully the Banshee and Tuskwood knights will be in some soon.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7311/12149478326_7eaf93b61a_c.jpg

From left: Apollo (Greek god of light), Inari (Japanese goddess of fertility), Marduk (Babylonian king of the gods) and Thor (you know who he is). I had an idea for a brickfilm where Blot kidnaps gods from different pantheons and puts them into a prison designed to hold, well, gods. Some of them manage to team up and stage a breakout, like Clash of the Titans meets Escape from Alcatraz. Medusa or some Cyclopes could be prison guards.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7313/12149230944_89d06249cd_c.jpg

From left: a construction worker who just wants to rock (who'll probably appear in Man with a Banana, when I get around to that), a random woman, a hired thief, and two zookeepers. Did I mention that I love the zookeeper torsos?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7421/12149237924_94dc81d659_c.jpg

Futuron Astronaut with a future boombox (left) and a kind of hazard suit guy (right). The Astronaut may be for Man with a Banana. The hazard suit guy isn't.
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5499/12149234424_b1c929301b_c.jpg

Now I'm not religious, but I've seen so many depictions of demons and Hell here on Flickr that I thought I'd add an Angel to the mix. Yeah, he's supposed to look like he walked straight out of the 80s. Did anyone else see Jesus Christ Superstar?
http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2850/12149493086_ac5ff27618_c.jpg

Random space-figs.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7362/12148837655_2262a945c4_c.jpg

That's all for now! Thoughts?

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I really like the space figures, gives off a nostalgic feel to it for some reason.

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That's a great batch of 'figs you've got there, Jampot.

I really like the Jarl of Vampire Town idea (although I'm not entirely sure about the Egyptian headdress).  I really want to find out more about Vampire Town now.  The Banshee's torso looks a bit off to me, because it's got green bits that go against the black/grey-blue of the rest of the minifig but aside from that I like the head/hair combo.  Draugr is awesome.

I've never especially liked the use of construction torsos as prison jumpsuits, since they have pens and zippers, which wouldn't really be on prison outfits.  However, since there are few alternatives (as LEGO insists on using the cheesy striped outfits) I can understand the use of them.  The brickfilm idea certainly sounds intriguing.  I'm guessing the prison somehow drains their god-powers?

The "hired thief" looks more like an adventurer/treasure-hunter or rebellious motorcycle rider to me, but I like the combinations.  The zookeeper torsos look just a tad feminine to me though, as they've got the black printing on the sides to make the waist look curved. 

As far as the angel goes, I'm not sure I'm sold on the 80s style, although it's certainly... interesting.  I can just imagine a cheesy retro action movie involving him....

I love the space people too, especially the boom-box one and the one in the middle of the last pic (those torso/legs go really well together with the helmet).

So yeah, hope you don't mind my excessively long post.  I'm really excited for "Man with a banana"!  I'm curious to know what it will be about (I'm guessing it will involve the man with the magical banana minifig you posted a while back....)

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FlyingMinifig wrote:

I'm really excited for "Man with a banana"!  I'm curious to know what it will be about (I'm guessing it will involve the man with the magical banana minifig you posted a while back....)

Well, at the moment it's a toss-up between Cyclopeia, Man with a Banana and Divinity: Supermax in terms of longer projects (DS being the longest), and I'm not sure which way to go. What I was thinking was starting writing DS but work on the other two solidly and see how they go, and do a CUUSOO for Divinity: Supermax (I have a bunch of great set ideas for it and I've been wanting to try CUUSOO for a while).

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A Jarl with an Egyptian headdress does seem a bit weird.  I feel like by the time he come to a Nordic land he'd have become tired of that.
The draugr looks cool besides the beard, just leave him bald and he'll look cool enough.
(BTW, I can almost perfectly imitate the sounds draugr make in skyrim)

FlyingMinifig wrote:

However, since you've mentioned green, possibilities could be this, this or maybe this.  I don't know the exact specifics of your collection, but I'm guessing you'd have at least one of those.

I have that last one, I was actually considering that one, but I think I may go just with my original shirt.
Throughout the entire set, I tried to include all six rainbow colours since Fred sometimes slides with a rainbow trail like Isaac the clown.  Garry's shirt, though missing a few, contains a few colours from the surroundings, which I feel complements them both.  Garry is also a very different sort of character than Fred and Henry, and isn't quite as stylish as they are, so the inconsistency in outfits still works.

However, I'm considering changing Garry's pants from dark blue to bright blue.  I usually prefer the darker colour for jeans to seem more realistic, but the is no dark blue anywhere else in the set, so bright blue may be better to complement the waterfall, the bit of blue on his shirt, and Fred's rainbows.

https://scontent-b-atl.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/t1/q71/s720x720/1620675_791255064222009_192315386_n.jpg

https://scontent-b-atl.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/t1/q71/s720x720/1545691_791254754222040_910727038_n.jpg

Dark blue or light blue?

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Squid wrote:

A Jarl with an Egyptian headdress does seem a bit weird.  I feel like by the time he come to a Nordic land he'd have become tired of that.

Vampire Town isn't Nordic, it's kind of a mish-mash of everywhere and nowhere. I just chose Jarl because I already had the Master of Wyvendale, and I thought Jarl sounded cool. Originally he wore the Basil the Batlord helmet rather than a set of nemes, but I didn't think it worked as well.

Squid wrote:

The draugr looks cool besides the beard, just leave him bald and he'll look cool enough.

Well, draugr are technically viking zombies, and vikings had beards…I don't play Skyrim so I don't know about its interpretation of draugr.

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Yes I like the new pants better.

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Jampot, I like the astronaut/hazmat guy picture.

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