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The color correction and chroma keying have not been done yet. Here it is:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/hqt02r2zbc0zw … C.avi?dl=0

I also noticed a small set bump mini/rolleyes

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Is this from a fight scene? The impact when the guy hits the wall seems a little... soft. Otherwise I think it looks good. It's easy to be picky when its a short clip.

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Is this from a fight scene? The impact when the guy hits the wall seems a little... soft.

That's the critique I got from chat and I agree. I will try to improve on my throwing-man-against-wall animation in the future. Thanks! mini/smile

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VN wrote:

Is this from a fight scene? The impact when the guy hits the wall seems a little... soft.

That's the critique I got from chat and I agree. I will try to improve on my throwing-man-against-wall animation in the future. Thanks! mini/smile

Have you tried removing a frame or two from that sequence? That might sell the impact a bit more.

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VN wrote:
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VN wrote:

Is this from a fight scene? The impact when the guy hits the wall seems a little... soft.

That's the critique I got from chat and I agree. I will try to improve on my throwing-man-against-wall animation in the future. Thanks! mini/smile

Have you tried removing a frame or two from that sequence? That might sell the impact a bit more.

Hmm, I've tried removing some frames but I think I've done all I can to make the 2nd shot flow well with the 1st one. If I take any out at the beginning then the movement would look jumpy.

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Re: Throwing - Clip from an upcoming short film

I don't think he's saying take any out at the beginning. I think right in the middle, there is a slight pause where he hits the wall. That's the problem. Taking out the pause makes the movement seem faster, thus, more aggressive with more realistic physics.

I put it into a video editor, trimmed a few frames from the middle, and cape up with this: (In the video, the original plays first, and after the gap, there is the updated version).

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zpoxciudhnp0c … m.mp4?dl=0

Not much difference, but enough to add a bit more realism. mini/wink

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rioforce wrote:

I don't think he's saying take any out at the beginning. I think right in the middle, there is a slight pause where he hits the wall. That's the problem. Taking out the pause makes the movement seem faster, thus, more aggressive with more realistic physics.

Exactly.

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I put it into a video editor, trimmed a few frames from the middle, and cape up with this: (In the video, the original plays first, and after the gap, there is the updated version).

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zpoxciudhnp0c … m.mp4?dl=0

Not much difference, but enough to add a bit more realism. mini/wink

The pacing definitely looks improved.

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rioforce wrote:

I put it into a video editor, trimmed a few frames from the middle, and cape up with this: (In the video, the original plays first, and after the gap, there is the updated version).

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zpoxciudhnp0c … m.mp4?dl=0

Not much difference, but enough to add a bit more realism. mini/wink

Nice, that actually looks better. I think I'll use it.

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