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That looks really really cool. I really like the set/lighting. The only critique I might have is that the framing looks just a little low. But over all it looks amazing, your improving a lot. Keep up the good work.
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Galactic, the frame looks good! I agree with what was said before about the lighting.
I have a picture that isn't part of an animation, but I don't know where else to post it, so it will go here.
I took the picture from my DSLR, adjusted some color settings and re-sized it. Do you people have any ideas on how I could improve it?
Thanks guys for the compliments and critiques. I will take it all into consideration when I start filming the scene. 
Rivvm m, I think the frame looks great!!!! My only critique is that the blue backdrop is darker on the left than the right, and thus makes it unevenly lit. You may want to add a lamp to the left Sind to fix that.
I would try to build the door on the roof out of legos. I'm pretty sure it's cg, and since it is so close to the figure, it would look better in plastic. Other than that, I really like it. I think the lighting is sweet and think that the cg buildings in the background look fine.
I think it would look better if you modified the building in the background on the right. The lights in the windows show that it's a copy-paste.
@Rivvm m I agree about the sky being too dark. It needs to be a more even color. Also, the frame is rotated strangely. Maybe if your rotated it it would look more balanced. 
@LMDigitalMovies There's nothing more that can be said than what has already been said. The lighting looks great, but the CGI elements look kind of out of place.
It looks nice, I especially like the lighting on his face, but you might want to add some multi-colored lights if you have access to them, because with the background you're using it seems like there should be some yellows and greens. Don't point the lights directly AT him, just point it to the side so the LEGO reflects the color of the light.
@LMD, it looks nice. I like the buildings in the background being different from each other. Currently, the height of the buildings in the background makes the building Batman is standing on look short. I don't know if you want that or not, just pointing that out.
I retook the shot of the bridge. What do you think now?
That's way better!
Something doesn't look quite right with that bridge. It looks like it's sitting on top of the stream. The arch brick in the center makes me think that the water should flow out of that area only.
I would make the bridge larger (e.g. use a larger arch piece over the water) or make the stream narrower.
actually, after posting this in the "Show of frame"ness thread, I am willing to change the colouring, so guess it can go here, I am shooting for morning. (after lighting evening... 
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You say that is supposed to be early morning? Hmm. It looks to much like sunset. Early morning is bluer and has less contrast in the shadows. They seem to be diffused more with a better fill light. Though, is your frame sepia tone, or is it just the lighting? Because everything looks a bit too brown/yellow.
Adding to Rioforce's Statement: Morning seems to usually be more yellow, less red/orange.
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