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No, I found it on brickshelf.

http://i.imgur.com/wcmcdmf.png

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hhmm very beautiful though...i want to do that sometime, i will need a lot of brown small plates though :S

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http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/FrozenBrickStudios/FrozenBrickStudios/Creations/misc/tp1.jpeg

What do you think of this shot?(This is a pesonal favorite)

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that is awesome i love the lighting and the angle
its very suspensful

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The framing seems off, with the man on the left almost out-of-shot.

Looks good, though.

- Leo

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No, I think it works well.

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I agree with Leonardo812, the framing is a little off with the guy a bit too far to the left.

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I think it looks fine.

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http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Sharkjaw24/stuff/picture_1.png

This is related to this test that I did 2 weeks ago.

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You sure cha.nged that car. mini/smile  I think it is cool

You can do anything, just have fun while doing it.

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Update:

Compare-
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Sharkjaw24/brickfilmsnews/picture_2.png
and
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Sharkjaw24/brickfilmsnews/picture_5.png

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Re: Works-in-Progress Post and Critique

The first is better.  Both are kind of grainy though, maybe use brighter light but lower the exposure?

http://i.imgur.com/wcmcdmf.png

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I think the first one might fit the mood a little bit better. (Given that you have a pirate with a hook in the frame) Reducing the grain would be nice, though.

- Leo

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I've been experimenting recently.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2497/3824758264_cefdc3151a_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2501/3823954403_53dcb7b5f3_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2643/3823949907_dc03c6b8b6_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3543/3823945439_af8f94ef49_b.jpg

the whole "island" technique.

http://i.imgur.com/kmwjd.png
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Wow, that is so awesome. Awesome job.

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Re: Works-in-Progress Post and Critique

That's interesting, and better than most attempts at water I've seen. It doesn't look very practical for animating though, especially with the dirt island.

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well, the animation on the island is going to be be very minimal, if not at all.

http://i.imgur.com/kmwjd.png
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That looks amazing, NOS, the only complaint I have is the background in the last picture. But the water effect looks incredible.

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is it aluminium paper ?
this is a interesting experiment

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If you where able to seemlessly connect the water and blue card the effect would be perfect, but the only shot that has me sold is the second.