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Hazzat wrote:

Gosh, even I didn't know that date.

What can I say? I'm a researcher at heart. mini/wink
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Here Is a shot from my WIP movie called "Ed night":

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Peiler/Brickfilms/Ed-night/screenshot_10.jpg

The guys infocus laying on the ground were shooten up. With the inclination of the cam I want to create more atmosphere. That's also the reason why the deph of field is so smal. The viewer should feel himself in scene.

What do you think about the setting .. did it work?

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Peiler/Brickfilms/Singularity/banner_04.png

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I don't like the angle. The frame is weighted to the left, as well. But I like the small DOF, and the set looks pretty good.

With all due respect Noodle, I don't want you here. - Ratboy Productions

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http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4066/4420962525_05f2f1b22d.jpg
Feedback????

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Great black expanse mutuceba...

Used to be 'Caidence'

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very good.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/315234895058173963/400133875549995018/Sig1.png

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I think that would look so much better in widescreen. Also, it's a little bit orange...

https://i.imgur.com/1JxY79v.png

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I think the orange was intended.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/315234895058173963/400133875549995018/Sig1.png

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Mutuceba wrote:

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4066/4420962525_05f2f1b22d.jpg
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That orange lighting is magnificent.
HQuiff

PunBB

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If it's a dude at night standing in front of a fire, then brilliant! mini/bigsmile

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Thanks for the feedback guys but to be honest this shot was an accident I took a picture and it just turned out like this and I thought hey thats cool. Yes I agree it does look a bit orange but I was experimenting with natural sun and color since the sun isn't pure white

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Hazzat wrote:

I think that would look so much better in widescreen. Also, it's a little bit orange...

I think the orange adds a certain atmosphere to the frame, although it's hard to expand on that without seeing the scene itself.

Also, Hazzat, your signature is hilarious. Not.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/ZoefDeHaas/stuff/sig1.png
"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

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here's a frame from Alien Parasites part II

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/jimmybob/MOC/capture22.png

Trying to make a good acid trip scene

-Jimmybob

Move over Rover, let Jimi take over.
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Pretty colours are nice. When is it out?

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radical.

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RP Hoogle wrote:

Pretty colours are nice. When is it out?

not for a while, I've only done about 3 minutes of it so far

-Jimmybob

Move over Rover, let Jimi take over.
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Sweet, I've never seen this thread. Maybe a screenshot coming soon.

Brickfilmer a decade ago, now looking to relive the glory days mini/smile

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Bump!

http://i.imgur.com/Fe9pT.png

For my Tales of Yore Entry!  mini/smile

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I can't believe I've never heard of this thread before. Seems like a great idea, lets keep it alive.
Anyway, RobBrick, your frames not bad at all. I just think that you should try to experiment with the lighting a bit more, it'll just add to the effect I think. I don't really know whats happening though, the lighting could be perfect for what your planning. mini/wink

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Hey, Thanks! The lighting is for a old Mental Institute, so I think it does a good job  mini/smile And he's just discovered
he's Mental, and that he has been speaking weird alien language for the last 2 years...

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