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FlyingMinifig wrote:

I'm working on a city street set, and this is what I have so far:

https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5569/14341976928_275c76a07a_c.jpg

It's still a WIP, but I don't quite feel satisfied with it and I can't quite place my finger on it.  Any suggestions?

Also, I built a police car.  I wanted to make it look a bit futuristic, but for some reason I think it ended up looking more like an '80s American muscle car...

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I really like the eye upon that building.  It looks really nice.  I hope that that building holds some significance in the film.

The two upper windows look weird, though.  I'd suggest making them of the same style as the lower windows.  It could also do with a little more dark grey detail.  It feels like there should be more there.
You should also try working on some interesting lighting for this.  I feel like whatever scene this is should take place at night since that eye would look cooler in a darker setting, particularly with light coming from within the building itself.

Also, make sure you dust your set.

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Agh..looking at other people's buildings and sets..just makes me feel embarrassed at how bland my own sets are mini/lol

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Just spend a little bit more time on them.  Making great sets isn't too hard.  Also sort your LEGO.

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I like that harbor set.  Boy, I don't have nearly half as many baseplates as many of the animators.  When I animated Hector Bing in ep 2 of my series riding a car and listening to jazz music, I did the old Tom & Jerry trick of keeping the car in a fixed position and cycling a series of backgrounds behind him.

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I find that when building sets, looking at mocs and real life pictures helps a lot.

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I've recently started doing that, and as the harbor is somewhat of an old set, (I build it about a year ago) I've been working to improve my sets a lot since then. I have an exterior to a police building, and I'll  put that up once I get home.

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A little wip picture from the Welcome to Darkmoor set:

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I've now built the base of the windmill with a stone path and I've made it so that the windmill itself sits at a slight angle against the regular flow of the studs.

This section of the set is from the upper left square of my map of the town which is really more of a background area, and the script itself has nothing specific that takes place here, but I wanted it to look nice anyway.

Most of the set is done now except for the side wall, back wall, and far road sections which still require a bit of work, and then the whole thing will need a decorating as I decide upon the specific tree placement and other extra details.

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i'd like to see something fill in the rear-right corner of the elevated base, but very good use of stone-like terrain.

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Oh, this looks great, but if you want the steps to look a little cracked to could maybe include one or two 1x1 plates with a stud on top and maybe a cheese brick or two like the sort of like what you see in the Haunted House, although if it is well used/taken care of you might want to leave it like this.

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I feel like I am mostly done with the set dressing on this, I realize that there should be two couches behind the seal but I made the seal in the carpet REALLY big so it could have some detail, I'm not going for a 1:1 recreation, just a caricature of the oval office, thoughts?
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The yellow curtains don't look like curtains, and the yellow is a bit too attention-grabbing. Stealing the glory from the great detailing elsewhere. I'd take those out, and maybe try to make those back windows bigger. (It's three windows there, not two, if I remember right. Changing that may help.)

It looks great, but doesn't instantly register Oval Office. It does in time, and maybe I'm just slow, but it seems to be missing a little something.

Squid,
Shouldn't you be running out of bricks sometime soon? How do you just keep building these great and part-intensive buildings only to say that it'll be in the background of a huge scene for only a few shots?

Flying,
The set looks good. You'll need something in the building because of the clear windows, but I like it.
Yeah, the car doesn't look futuristic, but it still looks really nice. Maybe try taking as much as a brick out of it's height, adding some detail or flashy something to the sides, more lights? Dunno, just throwing ideas out there. Hate to break that up though, I'd almost want to drive something like that.

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I thought oval office the second I saw it; I love the floor. I don't have much of a problem with the curtains, I think the whole thing is a pretty good caricature. Maybe the curtains would be a little better as a slightly more subdued color, like a dark burgundy red or pale blue, although I realize the bricks might be hard to find in those colors, if they even exist.

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I am limited by piece type for the curtains, this is the only other version I can get of the curtains, which do you like better?

http://i.imgur.com/jBVne02.jpg

I knew that there were 3 windows when I build the set (I did look at reference pictures) and was just trying to simplify things, and it will cut directly from this wide shot which also has a lower then actual window count:

http://i.imgur.com/y5D8SyW.jpg

I still need to play with the outside lighting to make it match the wideshot better so don't worry about that.

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I prefer the second version, but the lighting is also much more dramatic and awesome, so that may be affecting my judgement.

The White House looks nice, and will remove any doubt as to the room's location from slower brained folks like me. mini/tongue

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Yeah, it will let people see more of the sky, still have a few issues with the lighting, the current dramatic lighting to highlight a few of the sets issues the the bland lighting seems to hide, so I will be playing with it a bit more, but not that I have the sky sort of lit I think it's really nice to hide as little of the windows as possible.

The White House wide shot is what got me into brick built flags and I am a huge fan of them, printing flags on a piece of paper feels like a cop out, and you can have some fun, simple animation added to brick built flags although the hanging flags will remain static.

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Cool Oval office.  Are the photos custom or official prints/labels?

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Thanks, the photos are from the Medieval Market Village I have used prints in the past for my movies but I haven't even had access to a printer for the last few years.

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I think that the problem with the Oval Office is that the desk looks like a side thought. Not that it's poorly built, but it sort of makes it look like the President is shoved in a corner. mini/tongue The White House looks great! The sky looks kind of strange, though, but I guess you were going to fix that.

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Welp, you are a bit late, already animated every shot on this set, also the desk needed to be pushed back that far for some animation specific reasons which I am not disclosing, but it will work in the film. mini/wink

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Love the graveyard. mini/smile

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