Looks pretty sweet! A couple things, as long as you're still working on the set: in the first picture, that machine the guy who's the farthest upstage, it looks like it's a futuristic little speeder
I've never seen a piece of construction equipment like that, and if it's just there for looks, I'd suggest making something that looks a little more classical; however, if it's supposed to be odd-looking, and fits in with the storyline, then by all means, go right ahead. With the second picture, the TV screen isn't wide enough; practically all TV's these days are at least a stud or two longer than that, with the same height, and I don't think I've ever seen a flat-screen TV with anything close to those dimensions. I really dig that lamp, but you might want to add something else on the top; the way it is right now, it looks like a bare lightbulb, and unless that's the intent, it looks a little odd next to a flat-screen. The window, while amazing looking, is a little too large for an apartment, or any building that's right next to an alley/walkway like that; I love the window design, it's just like twice as large as it should be (windows in that kind of area would classically be higher rather than lower, by the way, in case you do make it smaller). The archway looks great, but having dark gray on top looks pretty odd; if you can change it so that there's a plate of dark gray all the way around, it'd be a good-looking doorway, but just at the top it looks weird. You could get an 8-wide arch, with tan 1X1 with holes, and keep the bottom of the plate texture going all the way around. But it's certainly a fantastic start!
-kcirbfilms
kcirb-- its brick backwards.
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