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This is a short but cool video I made yesterday when I was bored.

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Pretty cool!!! What's up with the lasers?

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pretty good, but you made a mistake in the spelling mini/wink

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All I had was lasers...

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Nothing wrong with it, but it was just odd. mini/tongue

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Guys stop rateing this guy Two stars. mini/sad  It was AWESOME. mini/smile

Hi'ya. mini/smile

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Stop bumping old film threads without saying ANYTHING worth it.

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LOL, leog Spiderman mini/XD

Edit: meh, kinda lame remark of me, sorry.

Last edited by Darkman (March 18, 2010 (12:07am))

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Good opening. The alarm was a little annoying. It would of been nice to see little more of a story. The animation was alright, nice to see no light flicker/set bumps. Next time try to do 15FPS, however, will make it look better.  The action scene was a little iffy. Lighting could of been better, as far as brightness/mood went. I liked the set, simple, but effective. The Dark Knight music didn't fit all that well...next time go with something more spiderman-ish.

And there's my review. 4/5.

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Batman music in a Spiderman film!? Next thing you know, people will be eating cookies for breakfast.

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Anyways, the editing could stand to be trimmed a bit. There were too many unnecessary pauses which sort of takes away the tension in the scene. Also, I think you forgot to include one of the laser-beam bullets when Spidey was dodging them.

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Next time try to do 15FPS, however, will make it look better.

I believe that was 15 fps.

Oh, wait a tick, this is an old thread.

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Spiderman really is a mod edit - please don't try to bypass the word filter
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MO6NOl97hEc

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