jampot wrote:Your animation is very smooth, but I think you could work on some of the voices. While a lot of them fitted in terms of pitch and tone, they weren't very colourful or animated (pardon the pun) and seemed quite monotone.
Also, Bats and Vader might have appreciated some chairs
It was nicely written, and that water-splash was brilliant.
Yeah, I really don't like my voice for that, but also it's still a bit too high.
As far as Batman and Vader go, I wanted some people to be standing, but others to be sitting in order to maintain a variety.
Also, my animation with characters sitting in the chairs was a bit shaky. That's mainly due to the fact that AnimatorDV quit working on me and I went without onion skinning.
Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it!
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