Any feedback guys? Would be really appreciative!

Sincerely,
Divine.

Hey Togfox,

Thanks for your feedback.
I'm still really confused as too how the volume is soft for you I can't figure out why its the case, I actually tested this out on 3 devices.

One was my computer where the volume was great or could go quite loud when the volume was at its max. Tested it out on an ipad the volume was again great. Then lastly I tested it out on an android phone and this one wasn't as loud but was hearable.

I think the besy way to hear it if your computer isn't very loud (May be the case) put in head phones? The thing is when I'm editing this, the volume is great like I overhear it and if it was quite low I'd fix it up of course. It may my computers volume is a lot louder than what your computer can produce but if thats the case I'll be sure to make it much louder the next time.

Thanks again for your feedback.

Sincerely,
Divine.

Ohh alright thanks for the confirmation Jahnocli, I'll be uploading a new one then shortly and I'll post the link please let me know if its better honestly on my computer its perfect.
I'll post it here when its uploaded!

Sincerely,
Divine.

Reminds me of a certain other brickfilm about Coffee & Carnage...

There isn't much to say about this, as there isn't a lot to it. I could point out the obvious stuff (the whole scene is from the same angle, the frame rate is a bit low, stuff keeps going out of focus) but that wouldn't be very helpful. You'll need to show more if you want more useful feedback!