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2,841 Reply by Rockydude411 January 23, 2014 (07:51pm)

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Galactic Films, did you not read this:

Timothy R wrote:

Have a set or prop you want critique on? Post it here.
If a person hasn't gotten critique in at least 24 hours, another person can post a set or prop. If the person has received critique from 3-4 posts, another person can post. If you do not understand, just say so. I'll try to explain it better.
It can be from a future brickfilm, or just a creation you've been working on for fun.

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2,842 Reply by Mickey January 23, 2014 (08:06pm)

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Wait, I don't understand. What did Galactic do wrong?

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2,843 Reply by Rockydude411 January 23, 2014 (08:09pm)

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Well, Galactic posted a hour after I posted, and I didn't get 3-4 post, the rules say:

If a person hasn't gotten critique in at least 24 hours, another person can post a set or prop. If the person has received critique from 3-4 posts, another person can post

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2,844 Reply by END films January 23, 2014 (08:18pm)

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Maybe Galactic didn't see yours in the middle of the discussion about squid's set. Also yours is a basic room set. It's not a bad one it just doesn't have much to comment about.

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2,845 Reply by Carousel January 23, 2014 (11:49pm)

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Such a calamity.
Man, I've got the NSA on the line - they'll be here momentarily with an elite team of anti-terrorism agents to arrest that time defying cyber-jihadist under the guise of 'Galactic Films'. Hang in there dude, the road ahead is going to be rocky, but you can persevere!!

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2,846 Reply by Galactic Films January 24, 2014 (07:53am)

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This is based off a scene from The book Star Wars: rebel force: target. It was a great book. So I'm doing a trailer for the book as if I were to make a movie of it. This is the first time I will try to do a script, so I hope it turns out alright.

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2,847 Reply by PrestigePie January 24, 2014 (05:54pm)

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Although this set cannot compete with many of the previous entries, I would like some feedback.
This is by far the best outdoors set I have made so far, most of my sets have been indoors.

I was thinking I should at some brown, sand and green to the ground.

I'm quite happy with the set, I'm probably going to expand. I want to improve it in any way possible. Maybe flowers? Or variety in color?

I might add my Minifigs to the critique thread on that.

Thanks all!

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2,848 Reply by Mickey January 24, 2014 (09:35pm)

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I was thinking I should at some brown, sand and green to the ground.

Yes, I think some sand would compliment the set very nicely. I like what you're doing, but I also think there's a little too much going on. I don't think it would hurt to take away one of the floral pieces. And I think the wall is a little too coloured; you seem to have a sort of odd colour pattern going on there.

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2,849 Reply by PrestigePie January 25, 2014 (06:22am)

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Yeah I was thinking that the flora was a little over the top. I kind of still like the weird colors of the wall, but I'll probably make it into a more solid gray.

Thanks for the feedback!

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2,850 Reply by jampot January 25, 2014 (07:05am)

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I think you mean flora. Fauna means animals.

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2,851 Reply by Galactic Films January 25, 2014 (08:29am)

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Rockydude411Bricks wrote:

Galactic Films, did you not read this:
Timothy R wrote:
Have a set or prop you want critique on? Post it here.
If a person hasn't gotten critique in at least 24 hours, another person can post a set or prop. If the person has received critique from 3-4 posts, another person can post. If you do not understand, just say so. I'll try to explain it better.
It can be from a future brickfilm, or just a creation you've been working on for fun.

I didn't know. I'm sorry guys. Now that I know I'll try to do better.

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2,852 Reply by Mickey January 25, 2014 (09:31am)

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jampot wrote:

I think you mean flora. Fauna means animals.

Thanks for correcting me, Jampot. I fixed my comment.

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2,853 Reply by Mr Vertigo February 2, 2014 (10:52am)

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I built some plants.

These aren't for any specific project, but if I ever need a jungle/fantasy scene I'll probably use them in that.

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2,854 Reply by Willow Tree February 2, 2014 (10:57am)

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Excellent designs! Brilliant use of Dr. Charles Lightning's hats.

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2,855 Reply by StefanMuscat February 2, 2014 (10:58am)

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Those trees do look like ones out of a fantasy/adventure film. Also, when I saw the bottom trees, especially the small ones, I couldn't help but think of mushrooms. Maybe it's just me...

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2,856 Reply by jampot February 2, 2014 (11:02am)

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OMG THOSE ARE AWESOME!

You have to do a film, even a really short one, just to show off these trees/shrooms. You have to. It's the law.

BTW do you have Flickr?

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