Topic: Pirates (Brickfilm)

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This video is about a pirate who gets stranded on a little island, but he finds a small box that he uses as a raft and he get a little problem on the way.

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Love the animation of this, and the music gives a sort of whimsical silent film thing. One question, why was the groove bricks logo in front?

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I think you copied the description into the link area, since that isn't leading me anywhere near Youtube. mini/wink

It's a well-made and interesting short, but the story is just a bit random, and seems to be there just to get a reaction.
The grunting got a bit old, so adding a few other sounds would have been nice.

I like the way you did the waves on the sea, but the wide shots could have used something like that to convey a sense of motion. Something about the fall looked off, almost like it was live-action. The after-credits scene could have used something else... (Perhaps a shark, or dolphin, or at least something else in the water.])

It was short, (But just long enough for me to burn the pancake that I was making.) and sweet. The music fit the tone, and the animation was pretty nice.

Good job, keep it up me matey. http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p84/UberSocks/17-2.gif

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Pirates are by far the best characters. There can never be enough Pirates.

I honestly wish this was longer, as your technical skills are excellent - but sadly the plot wasn't up to much. But its only a short, I guess...

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The link isn't working for me.

Is it working for others? Or is it on my end?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBE_9Cl7XRg

Last edited by Legocloniac477 (July 12, 2013 (01:15pm))

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Excellent animaton: Very smooth and pure. But you didn't animate much of action here. I would except more action for brickfilm called pirates. mini/lol Like when you put those texts: "30 min later" etc. maybe you would animate it. But next time then.