Re: Frame from Your Upcoming Film
Is that guy delivering a letter?
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Is that guy delivering a letter?
Is this another Gary and Julie film?
Anything I can improve?
I feel like there is too much space above his head.
NICE!
You may want to add something to the back wall several layers above the windows to break up all that blue. (A light bley stripe all along the wall would do the trick.) But other than that it looks pretty good.
Last edited by Pritchard Studios (July 28, 2012 (02:10pm))
Awesome!
The only issue I see is the one mentioned my Rsteenoven.
This is probably the most helpful thing you can look at to improve your cinematography skills.
This is called the 'rule of thirds'. here is the Wikipedia page for it.
I feel like there is too much space above his head.
So do you think if I put some posters on the walls that might improve it?
Unless you want the wall to be the focus of the shot, it would make more sense to lower the camera.
I personally think you should do both, to give the room more decoration and focus the shot on the character more.
Looking forward to it!
2 Frames from my newest project. I actually animated these scenes tonight.
What do you think. Can you spot something cool in the second one?
I Am The Night Poster (do I get a cookie? 
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Awesome!
The only issue I see is the one mentioned my Rsteenoven.This is probably the most helpful thing you can look at to improve your photography skills:
imageThis is called the 'rule of thirds'. here is the Wikipedia page for it.
There is a way to go into your camera settings and change it into that grid. I never knew what it meant, though.
Spider - Very nice! 
The only thing that looks a tad weird to me is the grey mountain piece in the upper right corner.
LegoCloniac - Looks pretty good (especially the posters (I am the Night)). The couch seems too large, though.
Kitchen sink?
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