First of all, welcome to BiM.
Your threads remain quite silent, don't know the particular reason.
If you looking for criticism:
1) there wasn't a lot stop motion animation in this, so hard to judge you on that.
2) Voice acting was sometimes less than convincing.
3) background music does miracles for making film more interesting to watch.
4) It's really ambitious to use mouth animations. Some of your are really nice, some aren't.
If you want to improve, try some basic 'exercises' like walk cycles and easy-in, easy-out.
Also the animation challenges are really fun to enter and you can learn a lot from looking at the entries.
BTW, don't judge this community for not using mouth animation. BiM is "Bricks in Motion" which says it all: focussed around moving lego stuff.
Last edited by boardron (November 12, 2011 (09:20am))