Note: These days, community activity has largely moved to the BiM Discord. Join us!
Bricks in Motion
Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
Ad
You are not logged in. Please login or register.
Even if it's a horror comedy, you need to incorporate the comedy into a horror atmosphere. The frame should be much darker if it's supposed to be night, and even if it's day, then I suggest making it a little darker since it's wayyyy too bland. Try an interesting angle, like an angle from the ground focusing on the door, the frame is too plain. Spice it up!
Needs some more detail.
Lighting and camera quality looks great, though. 
But the walls are very blank. It also could do with some stuff like a thrash can. Maybe a few Parrot would be nice...
Even if it's a horror comedy, you need to incorporate the comedy into a horror atmosphere. The frame should be much darker if it's supposed to be night, and even if it's day, then I suggest making it a little darker since it's wayyyy too bland. Try an interesting angle, like an angle from the ground focusing on the door, the frame is too plain. Spice it up!
Needs some more detail.
Lighting and camera quality looks great, though.
But the walls are very blank. It also could do with some stuff like a thrash can. Maybe a few Parrot would be nice...
The movie is supposed to start out happy hence the comedy genre. And I don't have a trash can or parrot. 
(Set building isn't my best skill.)
Whoah, I thought Tim R posted that frame. This MLP thing is so confusing, I have no idea who anyone is anymore.
Keesret, you could try adding a few windows, or patterns on the walls. Like a one plate high line going across where the second floor would begin, or the same thing at waist height.
Whoah, I thought Tim R posted that frame. This MLP thing is so confusing, I have no idea who anyone is anymore.
Keesret, you could try adding a few windows, or patterns on the walls. Like a one plate high line going across where the second floor would begin, or the same thing at waist height.
Yeah I know I should've 
but I already shot the scene and since you only see this for 4 seconds so it wasn't very detailed. The other 16 seconds are all closer to the person thus showing less wall as you can see here:
Last edited by Keesret (July 22, 2011 (10:01am))
That is not a close up.
Long shot
Here is another frame from the Leisure #3:
I keep having the feeling that those popsicles are filled with something lethal or some type radio-active waste which turns people into super heroes. xD
When shall it be released?
When shall it be released?
I'll upload it when it will be finished 
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH MAN!
There's a Cool Grill advertisement!!! xD
Haha, that's brilliant. Nice and subtle. :)
Lighting needs some work but oh well
Looks awesome, CardinalZenn. As you mentioned the lighting could be better, but it's still very well executed. The cinematography in that looks great.
Can't wait for it, I still remember your STAR entry (Awesome, it was).
-JK
CardinalZenn, try putting a white piece of paper next to the camera so that some light gets reflected back at the minifigs.
Viva la Vida???[/hopefull plea]
@Lechnology That's awesome, Lech. Except, the light on his face from the smart phone (I'm guessing that's a smartphone) looks a little strange.
@NXTManiac Great lighting. Looks a bit like a spotlight.
Viva la Vida???
Yup, that's the Viva guy. You can see if you look closely.
@LGFB Good frame. I love the Cool Grill ad in the back.
@CardinalZenn I think the lighting is fine. What's the setting? But the cinematography is great.
NXT, when is that film coming out?
It seems people have been excited about it for a very, very, very long time.
Also, very nice frame, I like the light.
Last edited by Squid (July 24, 2011 (04:36am))
Yes, we have.
A very long time.
Posts [ 1,041 to 1,060 of 3,680 ]
