Well, there were some technical aspects that have gone wrong here. First of all the light flicker was pretty bad, there was a lot of camera bumps and the effects where not the best. The set here was nonexistent and I didn't see a plot, actually, I had no idea what was happening. as for the good things the sound design was alright, but I would have liked to see a clearer story or description of what the film was about.   

I don't want to be harsh but it needs a little work, I hope you take some of this advice and use it for future projects.