Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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Gun fail
I made this film becuase i am bored
Well, there were some technical aspects that have gone wrong here. First of all the light flicker was pretty bad, there was a lot of camera bumps and the effects where not the best. The set here was nonexistent and I didn't see a plot, actually, I had no idea what was happening. as for the good things the sound design was alright, but I would have liked to see a clearer story or description of what the film was about.
I don't want to be harsh but it needs a little work, I hope you take some of this advice and use it for future projects. 
Well, there were some technical aspects that have gone wrong here. First of all the light flicker was pretty bad, there was a lot of camera bumps and the effects where not the best. The set here was nonexistent and I didn't see a plot, actually, I had no idea what was happening. as for the good things the sound design was alright, but I would have liked to see a clearer story or description of what the film was about.
I don't want to be harsh but it needs a little work, I hope you take some of this advice and use it for future projects.
alright
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