Yeah, the reason the mouths weren't smooth is because I'm way too lazy to make frames in between the mouth shapes. Although, as Hazzat said, I can get away with it 'cause it's for a school project and it doesn't have to be perfect.

Sorry man! That was a really nice project you got there! The voices were a bit quiet as The brothers said, and there was that problem with the faces that you mentioned in the start. Also, if there was anyway to apply a texture to the face so it looked more AE type and stand less out on the face that would have been awesome. What I mean by this is when you look at the teacher's face it stands out a bit, so that kind of diminished it a little (but not much!). All in all I liked it! 4.6/5 BTW was this 24fps? It seemed a lot like 15

-Tejas VIM

@VIMstudios - I'm not sure, I didn't even bother trying to use the node editor to do anything with it, but I think I might be able to. What exactly is an AE type though?

@Spades - That's because I was being stupid and accidentally rotated the faces back down to prevoius positions. And you have no idea how many times I had to mask out seperate things, wether it was a face, the CGI fire, or an additional Indian because I only have one.

And I wasn't meaning to sound rude or anything, but it seems like whenever I post movies or other topics, I'm always having to continually bump then up again just so that I get enough input on what I should do better, when everyone else gets lots of feedback.

Although it's kind of a splap in the face when you make a thread and then someone else, who happens to have much more popularity than the other, makes a thread in the same section, and then it's like every single person goes to that thread and ignores the other one made by the less popular person. It shouldn't matter who made what thread, but most people still think that if they comment on a more popular video some of the popularity will rub off on them. Though not everyone likes to admit it, the world is still extremely biased, (I hope I spelled that right ) although in a more subtle way. Not everyone does that though, so don't take this personally if you aren't biased.

I agree! I post a video and I get about 2-3 comments saying "awesome". And that's about it.

I like the troglodyte at the end

That was quite enjoyable. I love how the caveman gets it right.

The animation was pretty good, and so were the face effects. But they did look rather odd on the kid in the beginning. Good storyline, I like the idea, you jumped from time to time just at the right speed I think. The sets were decent and I liked the fire you had.

Overall a very enjoyable short. Keep it up! 9/10

Into the darkness once more. I walk into the unknown. To a far better life than I've ever known.