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Batman: Vigilante of Gotham (Episode #1) - Croc!

Batman: Vigilante of Gotham (Epsiode #1) - Croc!

In this premiere episode, people are being kidnapped into the sewers of Gotham City. No one knows what is kidnapping them, so the Batman decides to investigate.

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in some areas the Vo's where a bit um whats the word? distorted. like when he first enters the batcave.
still, quite good

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It is a little bit rocky. This show is going through an experimental stage. In other words, I'm seeing what works and what doesn't.
The next episode is a little rocky too, but has a lot of improvements.
By episode #3, I hope to have gotten most of the kinks out.

Thanks for your honest opinion. It is appreciated.

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also, i think batmans face is flesh coloured when he is in the batsuit and he is yellow when not, you might want to correct that.

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Sweet! Your on BricksInMotion too now! Welcome to BricksInMotion, and as I said on YouTube, I loved this video.

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SSSSHUDDUP. I love that line.

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I wanna thank you guys for your positive feedback. I really hope to get far in the series and gradually improve

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Fancy that, I'm make a Batman series as well

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Wow, I really like your own introduction to the film, and overall, id say it is pretty good. One thing though, but it might just be me: Batman's voice doesn't sound like its coming from him; its sounds like its coming from the cave, or God or something.

sigelrelster
Scripting: 100% Animation: 3% Post-Production: 0%

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elrelster wrote:

Wow, I really like your own introduction to the film, and overall, id say it is pretty good. One thing though, but it might just be me: Batman's voice doesn't sound like its coming from him; its sounds like its coming from the cave, or God or something.

I was experimenting with echo effects. I was seeing if I could make a convincing cave echo. I wasn't really satisfied with it, so I won't be using it in the next epsiode. But thanks for your honest opinion.

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You might want to consider new voice actors?

Batman has a deep, raspy voice, and this is just not deep enough.


But apart from that, very entertaining, keep working at it. mini/smile

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Brickyman wrote:

You might want to consider new voice actors?

Batman has a deep, raspy voice, and this is just not deep enough.


But apart from that, very entertaining, keep working at it. mini/smile

This show is set in the early years of Batman, so he is still young. I wanted to give him that young voice because of this. I didn't wanna go with the raspy Christian Bale-type voice, because his Batman voice sounds too forced.

But thanks for your honest opinion. I am currently working on the next episode. I'm just looking for some voices for a few characters, which I posted in another topic in the "Audio" section of this forum.

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i think batmans voice is meant to sound forced, cause of the pain of his youth and all.

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Hey CjaProductions, Here's a Trailer or Teaser, for my Batman Series
http://www.youtube.com/user/AlfaAnimati … _KyqzGwGps

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I have included a new YouTube link