Topic: Writers' Thread
So one_man_show gave me the idea to create a writer's thread.
The idea is to have a thread dedicated to writers, and I don't mean script writers...but story writers. People who write short stories, poems, novels, etc of any kind (as long as they are within the BiM rules of course).
So feel free to post your work here to get feedback on it, and just to keep order, I am going to make a few rules:
1. A person who has posted their work must have at least 3 feedback comments before another person can post.
2. If 2 days have passed without activity on the thread, the rule above doesn't apply...but it is reactivated the instant someone decides to
post their work.
3. Please don't bash when giving feedback to someone. If you think they really need to improve, tell them in a kind and honest manner. Also include helpful tips they could follow. We are here to help each other, not bash!
I will go first to start off the thread, the link to my story is below. And if you have any questions/suggestions about this thread, be sure to tell me thanks!
Link to my new story (a memoir for school): http://scypaxbooks.deviantart.com/art/T … -189574844 (There's a PDF download button to the right, under the ad)
Last edited by Scypax (December 15, 2010 (02:28pm))
Into the darkness once more. I walk into the unknown. To a far better life than I've ever known.
The first chapter (sorry it's the first draft and it has a lot of typos and isn't completely smooth):
