Some choices for the camera position were interesting, and the story was easy to follow. I'm not going to say sound would have helped: instead, I think complete silence helps me concentrate more on what I'm watching. At the start, no sound felt a little strange, but at half movie I got used to it and was fully immersed in the film. Good work again.

The lighting wasn't given too much attention due to the original plan to saturate the movie of all colours apart from red, and having really low lighting would have made the image too dark.

I guess the moral here is dont plan to do an effect if you cant get the effect.....(anyone know how I can do that effect?)

Hmm...

I'm terribly sorry to say, I didn'y quite enjoy this as much as your usual work...

But, interesting concept, and nice story...

Well, I don't know what video editing software you have, but you can do it a couple different ways
One is if you're using something like Final Cut or any editor where videos can be composited in separate layers. For each clip, have two layers of the same thing, the same clip: The top layer you would use the chroma keyer to take out the red. The bottom layer would have the exact same 'key', but inverted, thus taking out all but the red. Thus, you could put a desaturated filter over the top layer while the bottom layer (of red) stays in color. In FC you can simply copy the filters from one clip to all the others, so you would only need to do it once, for example. I don't know about other editors.

Regardless of the above, I quite liked the film. I certainly agree, without sound editing I as a viewer am forced to comprehend what I might normally dismiss as illogical or too complicated to bother following. Plus I always love 'circular' stories where the end meets the beginning

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An interesting idea, that was a little hard to understand.  Some of the visuals were amazing, but were dampened by poor image quality, sadly, as your sets were exceptional.  I really enjoyed it.  I can tell you put a lot of thought and work into it.  Some of the camera angles were dizzying though.

A strong 3.5/5