Not the best choice of clips for a trailer... guy raises arm, guys walk towards door, etc., and though the spotlight effect was a cool idea it didn't really work in practice, as your titles were too long and too difficult to read. You need to secure your camera and build sets that block out your room, because seeing you moving around in the background really detracts from any sense of immersion the viewer might get. This still has potential, especially if the story is good, but I'm afraid this trailer didn't interest me much.