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Guy wall- to- wall jumps. Bricks in motion wall- to- wall jump entry
Not quite my best film... but it was a good try...
It was a but fast. Also He didn't exactly jump between the walls
Way too fast. I had to replay the video frame by frame to realise that he actually jumps off the walls. (Even then it's more like he just flies up with his feet tapping the walls.) Still, a fair attempt. While you're animating, just think about what the audience are going to see.
Also, when submitting films to the directory, you have to put a link to the video - not your YouTube channel.
To start with - good effort! I can see what you thought and tried... but it wasn't brilliant. However as an amateur you have a lot to learn and that will come with time. I think the reason it was too fast was due to the fact you didn't actually do masking (I slowed-it down). Take a look at some tutorials. Fancypants has done one! So now for a quick review!
Set Design: 5.3/10
Voice Acting: N/A
Animation: 4.1/10
Lighting: 5.6/10
Story: N/A
Overall: 4.9/10 (Not bad for a first entry!)
Nice keep it up!
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