OK. It's silent, which isn't too god for a trailer. The animation is terribly rushed. The lighting needs improvement. You're seriously not considering an interesting text sequence. A trailer should not have credits at the end, maybe mid-film, but seriously, not like that. I'm making a trailer for my action film at the minute which could possibly be up to 30 minutes long, and I'm working my ass off for the trailer to be good. I don't care though, I'm excited and happy to be doing it. That's the sort of mood you should take. There's a lot missing here. You should just start off with a few tests to improve your skills. And seriously, KidsTube? That's lame. Sorry for being a harsh mean guy, but I want to give you my honest opinion so you can improve. I'm not giving you constructive criticism so that you'll run away and cry like a baby, I'm doing it do help you improve. We all start off like this, sometimes worse.
1/5 - Acceptable