You have some pretty good stuff! My suggestions would be to turn off auto-focus, and auto-white balance. I also noticed your fingers in quite a few shots. As Awesomeonomy said, your airport storyline was great, and the humor was enough to make me laugh out loud. You really have some potential, you just need to work a bit more on the technical aspects. I would also suggest raising your FPS to 15, as that seems to work best for most brickfilmers. I found the voice acting to be pretty good, but for christs sake please hold the mic a bit further away from your mouth. I really hate it when people blow into the mic like that, and it can really hurt a good film. Also, the camera seemed a bit shaky at times, and there were quite a few set bumps. To fix those problems, simply fasten your camera somehow with a cradle or tripod. To fix the set bumps, just tape down your set. It's really that simple.
The lighting issues can be solved rather easily. If you have a room with no windows, it would be best to animate in. If not, just draw the blinds. If you can't do either, it may be best to do the majority of your animating at night. It also helps to use at least two desk lamps when filming.
I hope all of this helps, and I can't wait to see more films with your style of humor in the future! You really have talent!
Last edited by Spudster (November 29, 2009 (02:22pm))