Um, ok?  While that was not a brickfilm, this was an animation.  This would be better suited under the "Other films" category of the Forums.  Anyway, on the animation I did see, (while very little of it)  it seemed somewhat choppy.  Maybe it was the light flicker.  My animation tends to look a bit unfinished as well with the light flickers, so you definitely need to work on that part.  I also couldn't tell if the set was moving or the camera.