Topic: Dolly Test/ Skateboard test/ fall test.

I did three tests in one! mini/bigsmile
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Criticism appreciated.

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Re: Dolly Test/ Skateboard test/ fall test.

Not a bad test at all. mini/smile

Keep working on making your camera movement smoother, but your animation looked pretty good.

- Leo

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Thanks, Leo!

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Re: Dolly Test/ Skateboard test/ fall test.

The camera movements weren't smooth enough, but the animation was good. The image quality wasn't top notch, but thats just a test. There was a frame or two where it was very dark towards the end.

Over all, a very good test.

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Re: Dolly Test/ Skateboard test/ fall test.

Pretty nice, a little camera flicker and the quality was lacking a bit, but overall good anitmation.  The guy on the skate board looks like me when I ran into my neighbors garage door! mini/lol

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Thanks guys!
Oh and Greesncreener, LOL.
More comments would be appreciated.

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Re: Dolly Test/ Skateboard test/ fall test.

that was good. Like everyone has said before, the camera movement should be smoother; and I thinks a me sees your hand in the dark flash during the fall.

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Wow. Amazingly you didn't say the same crud you always say.
Congrats, you gave your first constructive criticism! [/sarcastic]

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Just Kidden wrote:

Thanks guys!
Oh and Greesncreener, LOL.
More comments would be appreciated.

for a 2 second clip? mini/lol

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Re: Dolly Test/ Skateboard test/ fall test.

i personnaly liked it a lot
torwards the end i think i see your finger in the camera