It's a...Well, it's rather hard to describe. I'll give you that.
The whites were all blown out, which gave it a unique, almost dream-like quality. Which isn't bad...I think.
It's odd that wider shots seemed to leave a lot of empty space above the character's heads, with the closer shots not leaving enough, or even cutting off the tops of their heads. But enough on the negatives.
Your sense of humor is spot-on, with the jokes slowly building, then completely switching gears with the perfect 'tax refunds' line. Sadly, I didn't get it at first, but after figuring it out, I realized just how clever that line really was.