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Topic: Lego - The unexpected Invitation

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Lego - The unexpected Invitation

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A short film about a man who owes money to the wrong lego.

Viewer discretion is advised as the word ''F**k'' is in it.

Originally it was going to be censored but SV can be a real hassle when files are moved and I can't find the specific folder. Also sorry for the delay in films as of late, I have been very busy. But I am keen to bring in new content for yous soon! mini/smile

Feedback is much appreciated. Please don't judge the film by the language only, please watch it!

Sincerely,
Divine.

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Re: Lego - The unexpected Invitation

Well to be honest I wish the story was a bit more fleshed out.  Like what led up to this fight scene?  I think that would have made the film more surprising and shocking.  However, the animation was consistent, a little choppy but otherwise pretty good.  With what you had to work with, the film is good.  And the cursing didn't really bother me, however it seemed unneeded within the context of the rest of the film.

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Re: Lego - The unexpected Invitation

Hey Brick Block Animations,

Thanks for your feedback mini/smile

I do have to agree with you in the story should have been better explained. The main reason for it, was this was meant a chapter of a film but because I am not sure when I'll be able to complete the whole lot of it, I released this.
I appreciate that very much, this actually gave me quite a bit of work to do, since the masking of the first person getting shot was actually done wrong and it took a lot of work to fix it up but it was fixed in the end.
Its just in the script the word is a bit more frequent, and is the only main reason it was used, but I agree for this context at the least it probably wasn't needed.

Thanks again I appreciate your feedback! mini/smile

Sincerely,
Divine.

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Re: Lego - The unexpected Invitation

Yeh, I'm pretty sure you could of just said "What the hell!" Instead of you know what. The animation was good, but as you said, the story was a little unexplained. Still, well done!

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