It looks pretty good so far, though I feel that there should be more taller skyscrapers in the background--right now there's really only the one filling out the upper half of the frame, which makes it seem imbalanced. I think the skyscrapers should also be staggered a bit, as it looks like there's a just solid block/line of them with nothing in front of them, which creates an awkward-looking gap in the foreground of the frame. I'd either add something in the lower left corner to fill it out or re-arrange the buildings to structure a more natural-looking vanishing point as in the Blade Runner frame.
The skyscrapers could use some work too; I'm not much of a fan of the light-and-dark-grey striped look (though this might be personal preference). I'd also vary the shapes somewhat, using slopes, antennae, or domes, or even building something like the CN Tower in Toronto or the Seattle Space Needle to create some variety.
Also, you could improve on your lighting. I feel like lighting is often overlooked in Brickfilming, but don't underestimate it as good lighting can vastly improve your shots. Right now it's a bit basic. One problem is that you can see a shadow cast on to the backdrop by the skyscraper, which ruins the illusion of it being a city against an open sky. It also looks like you have only one light focused on a particular spot; it's much better to use more than one lamp to get rid of shadows and make the light more diffuse. This particular yellow colour also looks slightly off to me. Personally, I've found that using lamps with coloured gels (or coloured transparent paper, if you're cheap like me ) against a white backdrop can create a really nice look. Red and blue works especially well, in my opinion:
It kind of gives it a surreal and stylised feel without becoming too unrealistic.
In addition, consider focusing your camera on the building in the foreground instead of background. This will blur the background and might help sell the illusion of microscale buildings in the background.
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