I liked the concept and humor, I felt both were spot on. Perhaps using the LEGO smartphone printed tile would have helped (but I suppose you don't have it), fixing the special effects would have helped (but nothing could have really fixed that because of course time constraints), and maybe alter the white balance on your camera for more appealing colors. Sorry if my tips don't help, I just like to see people improve. But like I said, I enjoyed the entry and look forward to more content from you.

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Not bad! I liked the concept, and the story. The whoosh sound effects did help, I liked them. I think that even though the phone wasn't a printed tile, it worked, because we all knew that it was a phone. Though, who makes a gigantic machine to load an app on a phone? I thought that you could do it via USB.

(By the way, you might want to consider making the image in your signature smaller in height so it doesn't get removed, because the image size limit is 400x100.

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"Whatever you do, do all to the glory of God." - 1 Corinthians 10:31b

I thought the story was one of my weak points.
Yep, changed my signature.

Thanks rioforce for the feedback!

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Ephesians 4:29 -"Let no corrupt word proceed out of your mouth, but what is good for necessary edification, that it may impart grace to the hearers."