Topic: Lego Survivor Man
Lego Survivor Man
Can he survive out in the wilderness after a devastating plane crash? Or will he die from exposure to the harsh elements? Lego Survivor Man, a real man's man, has what it takes!
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Lego Survivor Man
Can he survive out in the wilderness after a devastating plane crash? Or will he die from exposure to the harsh elements? Lego Survivor Man, a real man's man, has what it takes!
Well, it was, ok. Needs a good deal of improvement. First off, there was no real conflict. He crashed yeah, but he was acting like everything was ok. I'd also like to add that you should improve your dialogue, as it was a little cheesy and didn't flow well. Second off what I didn't like was that the end was totally irrelevant. The police officer taking him into custody literally had nothing to do with the fact that he was lost in the woods after a plane wreck. The animation was decent, maybe a bit more frames, but I've seen way, way worse. So all in all, it was a decent film with a few things that need to be fixed. You may want to work on your story writing skills a bit and take more time to build a good storyline.
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