The violent shaking before the lift off kind of ruined it for me. I felt like it was too choppy leading up to something smooth. Without that I feel like it would've flowed a lot better.
Also the continual flower bump was minimal and understandable, but kind of distracting - which is odd because I felt like I shouldn't have noticed it, but I did. And I could swear there was a camera bump right after he took off. It was also very small, but still distracted me.
By the way what do you use to hold your camera in place? You use a DSLR, right?