Thanks guys for the opinions. You guys are all right, the focus was kind of crazy. To be honest, GHB was right about it being rushed. I had the basic concept for two weeks, and I rushed to get my entry done in time. As for the fps, I currently use 12 frames per second. I will increase it. As for the annotations, those were for my French speaking viewers. They always complain to me to use French, which is now their fault. I sometimes post my films on brick-a-brack, so I have to remember that not everyone speaks English.
To Mickey: The story was that a little poor boy watches as some maybe middle of first class kids receive gifts. The poor boy didn't get anything since most ignore him. Then, the truck driver of the gift exchange sees this, and gives him a little gift to cheer him up. The inspiration came from when my school filled up backpacks for homeless kids. I wanted people to remember that not every one gets to enjoy christmas, and we should do something about it. Well, that's my opinion anyway.