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  Hello there! This is a little film I made about a guy named Wally and his best friend Simon. They are in London England. I hope you enjoy the film mini/wink

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That was pretty good. I loved the cartoony and humorous bits of it. The voice acting was very well done, but the mic quality wasn't all that great. Do you use your webcam microphone or a Rock Band/Karaoke microphone? Just curious.

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Not bad, the humor was pretty good, and I always enjoy cartoony animation, but the it could certainly use some work. I'd say the biggest thing would be to improve the realism of the animation, as in, working on the easing in and out technique; you could also have probably used a few less frames in some of the movements to get the speed of the cartoony style right. Overall though, pretty good job. mini/smile

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Mickey: I use a webcam mic. I have a Logitech C920.

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backyardlegos wrote:

Not bad, the humor was pretty good, and I always enjoy cartoony animation, but the it could certainly use some work. I'd say the biggest thing would be to improve the realism of the animation, as in, working on the easing in and out technique; you could also have probably used a few less frames in some of the movements to get the speed of the cartoony style right. Overall though, pretty good job. mini/smile

  Thanks for the information mini/wink Feel free to let me know more ways on how I can improve! mini/bigsmile

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Well, I like it.
You seriously need a better mic, but the animation was fairly good and the humor was well done.
The car wreck was well done, as well as the gun recoils. And things escalated at a decent rate, not too fast, and not too slow.