Topic: Animation for my cousin karen
can anyone help me improve this script for my cousins video, this is for her work so please be serious and do not steal this
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(Opening title slide) PH Film – Lego animation
(Title slide) Pathology - What makes us sick.
Breakfast
Counting out pills
Derek - “Must remember to take the right pills ….”
Morning
Phone call
James - “Hi granddad, what are you doing today?”
Derek - “Oooo, I’m too tired & achy. I’m going to put the TV on lad”
James - “Ok, can I come over I need to ask you questions for a project”
Derek - “If you want to”
Midday
(sat at table) James - “So, just one last question what changes have you had since retiring?”
(making food at counter) Derek - “When I retired son, I lost all my contacts and now I hardly ever see anyone anymore”
Walks over from counter with plates
James - “Oh, are we having beans on toast again for lunch?”
Evening
On own – napping
(Title slide) Salutogenesis - What keeps us well
Breakfast
Eating on a sunny patio
John - “Ah, what a lovely day …..”
Morning
Grandchild arrives
John - “Come on sonny, what shall we do today?”
James - “Let’s get our bikes and go for a ride in the park & feed the ducks”
Midday
Sat on park bench
James - “so granddad I need to ask you some questions for school”
John - “ok, fire away”
James - “ and the last question what changes have you had since retiring”
John - “When I retired, I got and allotment. Now I’ve got fruit and veg all year around...and I see lots of people there most days”
(Gets up from bench) James - “Come on then granddad, let’s pick something for lunch”
Evening
Visitors – playing a board game