I appreciated the effort of using the original language. However, everything else was pretty lacking. The sets were plain and empty, it was kinda distracting to see Jesus wearing pants, medieval mega blocks soldiers as romans, and gollum at the end (although it was clear he was supposed to represent the devil, Christian or not). The animation consisted mostly of stills, and the rest was very choppy. In this case, animation wasn't really needed as it was mostly Jesus speaking, which means there wasn't much work to do.
Cinematography: it almost looks as if you just put the camera there and shot, same with the lights. You should work a lot more on lighting: it didn't create a proper mood. Also, "digital camera movements".
Your accent in the audio was too american, and the words kind of blended between them.
Can't say much about the story.
Overall, it's really lacking. I know this review sounds really negative, but I really think you should work a lot to improve your skills. Keep practicing
, you'll get better.
1.5/5