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Batman Gotham Legends: Season 1: Ep.1 Beginning
after Bruce Wayne's 8 year journey, he returns to Gotham to become the terror that strikes in the night, the fear that hits in the heart of crime--BATMAN!.
Ugh...terrible dialog, unoriginal and derivative of the Nolan Trilogy. "WHERE ARE YOU?!" "Here!" That only works if you build up suspense for both the characters in the scene and the audience. This didn't have that. Also, certain voices were too melodramatic, too contrived, too I'm-reading-these-lines-to-a-microphone, rather than I'm-performing-these-lines-to-a-microphone.
I'm not going to bother with spoiler tags.
I like the inclusion of Smallville-originated Chloe Sullivan. That's all I can say.
More effort on the editing next time. There's flickering in shots like with Luthor and the pacing was awful. I didn't even understand the appearance of the green eyed character towards the end. Obviously something to address in the next episode, but his appearance was abrupt.
Ugh...terrible dialog, unoriginal and derivative of the Nolan Trilogy. "WHERE ARE YOU?!" "Here!" That only works if you build up suspense for both the characters in the scene and the audience. This didn't have that. Also, certain voices were too melodramatic, too contrived, too I'm-reading-these-lines-to-a-microphone, rather than I'm-performing-these-lines-to-a-microphone.
I'm not going to bother with spoiler tags.
I like the inclusion of Smallville-originated Chloe Sullivan. That's all I can say.
More effort on the editing next time. There's flickering in shots like with Luthor and the pacing was awful. I didn't even understand the appearance of the green eyed character towards the end. Obviously something to address in the next episode, but his appearance was abrupt.
thanks for letting me know, constructive critisism is allways welcome here, 
The music in the beginning gave me a headache. The dialogues were kinda bad, and the audio was far from good, I've heard weird echos, background noises and etc. it devalued the quality of product greatly. I'm pretty sure you can do better, honestly I didn't enjoy this one at all. I think you should settle for 5-7minute episodes with better quality instead of this.
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