Not bad! As you said, there is a bit of choppy animation; however, I'm not exactly sure that it's your framerate (btw what fps are you using?). Whenever you have a close-up shot, which this film is pretty much entirely composed of, you have to take more pictures than you normally would, in order to make the same movement look smooth. Filming close up is a big difference from "regular" brickfilming, which generally consists of wider shots. So basically kudos to you for taking on a trailer like this The sets didn't matter too much, to be honest, because most shots are close up and you can't see much of a set anyways. I'd certainly experiment more on close-up shots if I were you, just because you've kinda crossed into that territory and I'd be interested in seeing where it took you!
7/10
-kcirbfilms
kcirb-- its brick backwards.
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