• Joined: April 28, 2012

Topic: Lego Short- Action Short

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Lego Short- Action Short

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A lego action film. It's my first animation so don't be too harsh. mini/smile All tips on how to improve are greatly appreciated.

Last edited by NinjaFastProductions (May 8, 2012 (04:18pm))

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Re: Lego Short- Action Short

This is your first animation? Wow, awesome!

I think you should improve your lighting... Here's a good tutorial:
Let's Learn With LEGO! Basic Lighting

There is no music in your video and that's pretty boring... You should try http://musopen.org/ mini/yes

Keep up the good work!

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   -Concept: 2/10
   -Cinematography: 3/10
   -Sound: 4.5/10
   -Animation: 5.5/10
   -Effects: 4/10
   -Sets: 4/10
   
→OVERALL: 4.5/10

*The Overall rating as nothing to do with the other categories... It's just my overall appreciation of your film.

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  • Joined: April 28, 2012

Re: Lego Short- Action Short

Thanks, I just got a lamp so I'll try it out in my next movie. mini/smile

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So that your faith might not rest on men's wisdom, but on God's power.
     1 Corinthians 2:5