Topic: EGGS!!!!!!

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EGGS!!!!!!

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This is my entry to the EASTER 2012 contest.

Re: EGGS!!!!!!

I thought that this was pretty good! You had some pretty comical stuff in there. I really liked how you were able to create a forest background. I also liked the premise, the man that was going crazy was a creative character. There are a few things that you might want to work on for future films though. First of all, I didn't care for the sound that much. The lack of background noise didn't create the environment that I think you were aiming for. Maybe the sound of a light breeze, a few birds chirping, or some leaves rustling would have been nice, but complete silence didn't work in my opinion. Also, the voice acting didn't quite sound convincing all of the time. The crazy man should have been overjoyed at the sight of the eggs to make it seem realistic. The animation was alright, a little more easing in and easing out should help you improve in that area greatly.

All in all, this is a pretty funny film. You gave me quite a few chuckles. I hope that you place well in the contest!

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