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FIGHT CLUB

My entry to the four monkeys contest
(The camera was shaky because most fight scenes I watch have a shaky camera, so please do not talk about it.)
Tips on making a better fight scene are welcome.

Last edited by funmiproductions (November 19, 2011 (02:17pm))

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It's alright, the camera steadying and frame rate could use some work though. Also, you could try using audacity to get rid of the buzz when your recording your voice.

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I used audacity for this mini/blankexpression

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funmiproductions wrote:

I used audacity for this mini/blankexpression

Did you use the built-in mike on your computer? Even if you're using Audacity, using the wrong microphone makes it sound bad.

Not literally dead, just no longer interested in Lego or animation.

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Sorry fumniproductions, but your camera sucks, and camera bumbs, bad quality, noise and light fliking and choppy too. And minifigs don't walk, they just move with no moving feet. I think you should do much better than this. I think that was actually bad. Don' be bad for my comment, I just critized how I see this. Logo and name were good. Be happy! mini/bigsmile But yes, do better.

Last edited by Lord Lajaka (November 20, 2011 (02:47am))

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Jesse the Ninja - filming 50% - editing 20% - over all 35,0%

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Camera bumps,light flicker,and the "loser with a gun",well,you need to use a hairpiece to cover his mini/smile face,so only his mini/eek
face is visible.
1/5 dynamysytic points.
Keep practicing,i look forward to your future films.

-CDP

Last edited by Troodon (December 4, 2011 (10:07am))

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cooldynamyteproductions wrote:

1/5 dynamysytic pints!

Harsh. mini/no Especially with the exclamation point.

Really, I gave it 2/5. It isn't that bad. There's a lot worse brickfilms I've seen. Though yes, there are camera bumps and light flickers though no need to just list it all and call it terrible. Okay, I'm overreacting.
At least you could say something like "keep practing and you'll improve" or "I look forward to seeing your future films."

-LASF

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Well saying "I look forward to seeing your future films" would be a lie most likely. . . but yeah cooldynamyteproductions <(that's a long name right there) you should have said "keep practing and you'll improve" mini/smile

Last edited by mada (December 3, 2011 (06:09pm))

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you gotta take way more frames bro! also more lighting helps! keep trying, you can only get better!