Bricks in Motion
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FIGHT CLUB
My entry to the four monkeys contest
(The camera was shaky because most fight scenes I watch have a shaky camera, so please do not talk about it.)
Tips on making a better fight scene are welcome.
Last edited by funmiproductions (November 19, 2011 (02:17pm))
It's alright, the camera steadying and frame rate could use some work though. Also, you could try using audacity to get rid of the buzz when your recording your voice.
I used audacity for this 
I used audacity for this
Did you use the built-in mike on your computer? Even if you're using Audacity, using the wrong microphone makes it sound bad.
Sorry fumniproductions, but your camera sucks, and camera bumbs, bad quality, noise and light fliking and choppy too. And minifigs don't walk, they just move with no moving feet. I think you should do much better than this. I think that was actually bad. Don' be bad for my comment, I just critized how I see this. Logo and name were good. Be happy! 
But yes, do better.
Last edited by Lord Lajaka (November 20, 2011 (02:47am))
Camera bumps,light flicker,and the "loser with a gun",well,you need to use a hairpiece to cover his 
face,so only his 
face is visible.
1/5 dynamysytic points.
Keep practicing,i look forward to your future films.
-CDP
Last edited by Troodon (December 4, 2011 (10:07am))
1/5 dynamysytic pints!
Harsh. 
Especially with the exclamation point.
Really, I gave it 2/5. It isn't that bad. There's a lot worse brickfilms I've seen. Though yes, there are camera bumps and light flickers though no need to just list it all and call it terrible. Okay, I'm overreacting.
At least you could say something like "keep practing and you'll improve" or "I look forward to seeing your future films."
-LASF
Well saying "I look forward to seeing your future films" would be a lie most likely. . . but yeah cooldynamyteproductions <(that's a long name right there) you should have said "keep practing and you'll improve"
Last edited by mada (December 3, 2011 (06:09pm))
you gotta take way more frames bro! also more lighting helps! keep trying, you can only get better!
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