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Here it is!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XoeQhyyYPfY
It looks like you're not anticipating and following through on movements. The walk and run cycles were very jittery, you need to keep the back straight.
nice. but I think you need to wok on the flying test a bit.
Aww... Harry Potter. Actually pretty good, but the explosion test was a little sloppy, 'cause in screen the explosion goes hide on top of screen and Harry Potter not, and that stem of the explosion's resolution is lower and it's smaller than the video. And I think you can't do much of it. I have the same problem, when I use Wax 2.0, but you can set the explosion a little lower, but I don't know that it helps you, and I don't think that help; but you can try, always. Editing require your time. Remember that.
the flying test was defiantly the worst
why where his legs backwards?
you should watch this tutorial
and also look for his tutorial on making Legos Fly while you there
other wise I think with little practice you will get it eventually
I know it, that you set that link to this topic, Coyotr Creek Films. 
Haha! But it is the best tutorial for flying.
Thanks for the feedback.
For the flying I have no idea why i made his legs backwards.
I have watched the Fancypants tutorial many times before. Also, I did not use masking for the flying. I keyframed it in Sony Vegas.
The explosion messed up when I rendered it. When I was editing it looked fine.
Explosion needs work. Try increasing the aspect ratio in the layer where the explosion is in so it won't get cut off.
The fights also will need work since it really only seems like the mini fig is tapping him. Keshan8 on YouTube has a good fight sequence. I don't believe he has a tutorial for it, but you might be able to get some ideas for it.
Flying also needs some work, mostly around the legs. If you are using a green screen, try making his legs a different color, because it almost looks like his legs were keyed out a little since you can see through them a bit.
Anyway, I like your walk cycle. Best part in the video.
Thanks.
His legs were grey, and I chromakeyed out the green, so I don't know why you can see through them.
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