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Just to kick off my joining of Bricks In Motion, here is my newest film as of today, September 26th 2011.

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This was only your THIRD film! mini/delirium
that was pretty good! a bit gory though. mini/confused
The only thing that needs work is your story.
I had no idea what was happening but I enjoyed every second of it.
I think this would be a good film to make a sequel to answer some questions like:
"why the stormtroopers are there?" and "what do the want?"
you kind of answered these but I am still left hanging.
good music choice and the animation was smooth and had little camera bumps.
looking forward to seeing some more from you mini/wink

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Coyote Creek Films wrote:

This was only your THIRD film! mini/delirium
that was pretty good! a bit gory though. mini/confused
The only thing that needs work is your story.
I had no idea what was happening but I enjoyed every second of it.
I think this would be a good film to make a sequel to answer some questions like:
"why the stormtroopers are there?" and "what do the want?"
you kind of answered these but I am still left hanging.
good music choice and the animation was smooth and had little camera bumps.
looking forward to seeing some more from you mini/wink

Thanks! The only reason it was gory is because it was an entry into TomJoeTwins contest, so I thought it would improve its appeal to them. And a sequel? I've been cooking up some ideas but I don't know if enough people would be interested in it. I would be interested in it, but I would also be just as interested in some other things. If you have any plot ideas or anything though, please let me know because I would really appreciate it. mini/smile