well you are improving. you really need to take care of the camera bumps what I do is I tape down my camera and that (for the most part) will remove the camera "wiggles." The next thing that I noticed was that the music was more like a grooving style and really didn't fit with the whole depressed theme. those are the only things that you really should take care of but I would also suggest that you shorten that part with the fire or put a joke at the end. I would suggest this because it went for a long time and I kept expecting something to happen afterwards. it was a pretty good effect though. before I end my rant I will only suggest that you don't ask for subscribers. there is nothing wrong with it but it makes me think that you are desperate and can't get them any other way. Don't get me wrong it was a good video and I can see a lot of potential from you

wow this went long