Your cinematography and animation were nicely done. The black expanse was simple, but suited the short. I hope that you'll continue to develop your storytelling, however, as there really wasn't much to this, aside from the supposedly-metaphorical non-sequiters. It felt like you were aping a style before you had developed any substance, which, it seems to me is the wrong way to go about it. That being said, stylistic experiments like this can certainly help to gain experience with which to tell future stories.