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Crazy %&$ Haley
After being fired, Haley is thirsty for some revenge.
Last edited by Cavcstudios AKA Carlos (July 28, 2011 (10:18am))
the voices were not good it was very choppy but the camera quality was fine 2 stars 
Ok thank you.
Well, the animation was choppy, like JaredSM (EDIT: JaxonSM, my bad) said above but the computer voices actually fit the characters.
I didn't like the strong language but I am not going to judge the video by cuss words but others may.
The lighting was too bright at some points but at night, it was almost perfect.
The sound effects were ok.
Overall, the film deserves a 2/5 though it was a good shot and I see you put a lot of effort into making this.
Good job. 
-LASF
Last edited by LASF (July 28, 2011 (03:51pm))
Thanks bro, I still have much room for improvement.
Last edited by Cavcstudios AKA Carlos (July 28, 2011 (03:53pm))
Any more comments?
How do I know if my film was rejected? Would I get a notification?
How do I know if my film was rejected? Would I get a notification?
The Film Directory has been restructured, so I think your film has been accepted into the 'All Films' panel with the other films in the directory.
Animation OK, but the camera is too shaky (try to fix it firmly with rubber band or tape), and there is a bit too much flicker in the colors. What camera are you using?
Animation was a little bit choppy and there were camera bumps and light flicker.
Also,the voices sounded weird(sounded like robots).
Overall: 2/5.
EDIT:Cuss word from title was removed.
-CDP
Last edited by Troodon (January 31, 2012 (05:49pm))
Ha ha you think children don't know what a** means? 
Ha ha you think children don't know what a** means?
Well,due to 5-year olds playing MW3,i guess they do....
Alright,@$$ is just another word for donkey...
Until an idiot used it as a cuss word...
-CDP
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