Animations were OK (certainly better than mine), but there's room for improvement. Luckily, this type of films is excellent for practice!
I liked the sudden bluntness of your topic (but then again, I'm just a mean spirited person) and I thought episode 2 had a great comeback. The trick could be wearing thin quickly, though! Something to watch out for.
Aside from story and animation, you could look into things like lighting and picture quality. The current level is not disturbing, but I think you could get great improvements with relatively little effort in this department.
-PG
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Version 1 of the
the screenplay for episode 2 of
The Stunt is finishised, and I
really, really] await your
critique!