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Topic: Bro pt.1 (redone)

Hey, well in the old forums, I recieve alot of suggestions for this film... so I decided to redo some of the parts. I completly re recorded the voices and i think they are a bit more clear now. Unfortunatly i couldnt animate anyone moving in the background of the pan shots but it was because it was so redicuously hard to get my fingers inside the set w/o bumping it... So i went w/ alot of pictures:)

Anywase, this film is about Jak trying to find out what has happend to his brother, Dan. He does this by talking to Dan's former "boss"...

Im currently in production of the 2nd part now... so it should come out soon.
Enjoy...

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http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CJWFi … _pt.1_.wmv (better quality)


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Re: Bro pt.1 (redone)

Seems interesting for a start.

Although it seems a bit too early to end it when you've only just drawn the viewer in. Some music during the scene would also help develop a more perceivable tone to the story being told on screen.

Very cool though.

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Re: Bro pt.1 (redone)

Thanks Tripod. Yeah it is kinda short... but I'm going to make the next part longer

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